by luciousloneliness
Nice start to, hopefully, a series, or at least a sequel, or two! Keep writing and we'll keep reading.
Lucious, great debut! I like them both, and they could be a great pair, but even as a one-off, this is good stuff. You're a literate, thoughtful writer, and that counts for a lot. I've only a few minor quibbles, which follow via "Send Feedback." And I only quibble good writers, of which you are definitely one. Keep writing!
Well written dialog, decent scenario, and very steamy sex put together in one page. Thanks.