All Comments on 'A Stranded Motorist'

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gotranegotranealmost 13 years ago
Nice Start!

Nice start to, hopefully, a series, or at least a sequel, or two! Keep writing and we'll keep reading.

estragonestragonalmost 13 years ago
More!

Lucious, great debut! I like them both, and they could be a great pair, but even as a one-off, this is good stuff. You're a literate, thoughtful writer, and that counts for a lot. I've only a few minor quibbles, which follow via "Send Feedback." And I only quibble good writers, of which you are definitely one. Keep writing!

PlayWithMe1981PlayWithMe1981almost 13 years ago
Love it!

Just what I needed tonight! Short and to the point!

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 13 years ago
verry good story.

Well written dialog, decent scenario, and very steamy sex put together in one page. Thanks.

fingers46fingers46over 11 years ago
Short.sweet & neat,excellent

Very good,enjoyed this

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