by nageren
I love her internal conflict. I love that she hates discovering he's a person, not just a pervert. Good job.
I’ve come back to read this entire story a few times now as it is reminiscent of agood novel.
She had problems before she went to his house and it looks they are still with her.
Lots of fun.
Keep up...refreshing ..it has great posibilities. I'm a sucker for happy endings but I'm a happy camper if you just keep on posting.
Thanks :)*****
...is a strong continuation of the storyline. The characters are acting and talking and developing in a believable manner.
It will be very interesting, when in a couple of years, you bring this story to a conclusion. To go back and read it in it's entirety. This is promising to be a fascinating novel.
Yes yesssss
Some weak sides Gina showing in there :)
Trudging through a very realistic phase, and I like the way you describe their lovemaking, oh, physical interactions rather :)
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