All Comments on 'A Strange Compulsion Ch. 02'

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Better than the first one

Great story with a weird premise. 5/5

Good start, give us more.

I'd get a new editor if I was you. There was a number of glaring mistakes such as Janice suddenly being Caroline on page one that an editor should've caught.

@Nevadid. Thank you so much for pointing that out. I have gotten a new editor :) This chapter was published before that.

Very nice

Nice concept and overall story. I think the story flow feels clunky because the story description of what’s happening jumps to different positions and maneuvers one sentence to the next without transition description sentences. :)

You thanked your editer, what for? Either they haven't read this story or your not taking their advise.

There's being dominate and then there are pathetic assholes that think they are Doms.... Your character is the later.

"She'd had sex with guys with huge dicks before, and after she dated Jason" Didn't she break up with him two days prior? This girl didn't wait very long to go slut it up. Trash.

So, not only are Sophie's parents apparently deaf, but everyone else at the theater was both deaf and blind.

And interesting that nothing said anything about Jason suddenly becoming buff and yet he toted Janice around.