All Comments on 'A Struggle'

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RonRWoodRonRWoodalmost 15 years ago
I liked it...

I like these type of stories. I did not like your female character much. You describe her as headstrong, stubborn, reckless, arrogant, needy, unappreciative, and willing to be a degree unfaithful with a being she knows her husband despises. Yet you continue to say how much she loves him. She admits she does not respect him, thinks he is not a real warrior like she is, and is not the man her partner Alexander is. She is evidently a drunk, a high risk towards her husband, and is extremely stupid... Yet, I like these kind of stories on the whole. I do hope that he finds a better woman to fall in love with. She is forgetting him quick enough...

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