by AlenaDare
Hoping for more with a bit more character development. The description of the flat and her predicament was well done. Her surrender is a bit sudden, but this is a fantasy after all. Again, more.
... if quite unlikely. I congratulate the author for sucking us it - the blood on her dress would, obviously, be from her defloration, but no, that's not it: she has already been deflowered, and not lost her place in society
I care little for sequels, but this one I will keep an eye out for