All Comments on 'A Study in Scarlett'

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Rawmaster50Rawmaster50about 11 years ago
Nicely done

Hoping for more with a bit more character development. The description of the flat and her predicament was well done. Her surrender is a bit sudden, but this is a fantasy after all. Again, more.

H.H.MorantH.H.Morantabout 11 years ago
It WAS nicely done

... if quite unlikely. I congratulate the author for sucking us it - the blood on her dress would, obviously, be from her defloration, but no, that's not it: she has already been deflowered, and not lost her place in society

I care little for sequels, but this one I will keep an eye out for

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