All Comments on 'A Suddenly Single Doc Ch. 01'

Jeez, talk about a fantasy world. What happens when you wake up and realise it was only a dream?

Ouch! Burning hot story that is really nicely written and well paced! Cannot wait for more of this story! Thank you for sharing your wonderful story!

Oh I think I'm going to like this one! Mom told me to go to med school but No I wanted to be an Engineer and build things!

Cheers

SAGE

Doesn't the UCMJ forbid relationships between commissioned officers and enlisted?

I like this

The UCMJ does frown on it, but if the parties are not in the same chain of command it’s generally ignored. Steve is Air Force. Diana & Julie are Army. Claire is an Air Force officer’s wife in Steve’s chain of command. Of the three women, she would pose the greatest risk.

I loved it! Can't wait until the next chapter! Five stars and a favorite point!

Great story. Thank you

We Love this and it has got to be one of the most interesting I have read since I have been on here. But she keeps asking me if I fucked all the women when I was on base. LOL thanks. Keep us up to date on your new posting please.

I like the story, so chapter 2 please. AAAA++++

Absolutely no emotion, no love just two perfect people with no apparent flaws ( other than them being sociopaths) with non conflicts and everyone living happily ever after. Boring. His wife leaves him and he just shrugs. Apparently the wife of the big dicked doctor with a 5 star lover rating had no back story worthy of explaining why she left.... meh

Hey anonymous

No UCMJ ISSUES. He is USAF OFFICER. She is ARMY. THEY DONT WORK TOGETHER.

and…. This is fantasy erotic fiction, don’t sweat it.

very nice keep it up

Great story, hope you plan on continuing it. Well done 5 stars

I get that he's in the Air Force, and she's in the Army, but he's still a captain, while she is only a sergeant. How is that not improper fraternization? I found a 17-page Army policy document online that was too tedious to read, but it looked like officers can't boink enlisted, even if they are in different service branches.

Dear Anonymous,

First, this is fiction. Second, it happens all the time. Court martial me.

Please continue to write this. 5*****+

Trying to be patient, waiting on the next chapter. Hope it arrives soon

Loved the story and setting in the military base. Looking forward to the coming follow ups.

Sorry for the delay. I’m finishing up my Solstice story. I’ll be back to this one fairly soon.

Loved it…more, please, please, PLEASE…!!!

I'm giving you five stars, though I thought he was a little emotionless about the wife leaving. And no mention of divorce filing. Regarding the Officer / enlisted item, it happens. While they could be brought up, it will be ignored unless if affects their performance or leads to some other bad behavior.

The other item is that if this is just the second woman he has ever slept with and he has this much skill, then it is obvious the wife did not leave because of the sex.

Love this story, except for screwing another serviceman’s wife even if she’s in an “open” marriage.

Not only wrong, but against the UCMJ.

Bill S.

I really liked this story and believe it is worthy of several more chapters. Please continue this story into a long series.

Finish the damn story

There's a trend here…finish the damn story! Also, it's Kobe beef.

Enjoyed! Would really like to see a follow up to this

Such good writing and a great story but so frustrating that 6 months have gone by since you promised to continue 😟

Needs to continue!!

Your AF Base in Northern Japan with that secure "antenna farm" on it wouldn't happen to be Misawa would it? Been there for 6 months loved it. Good Story.

@Magilla5 - Misawa was the base I used in the story.

A masterpiece of erotics and fun dialogue. Both Steve and Diana keep their conversation light and true to their respective characters. I also appreciate the absence of loose ends. Two sets of 5 starts ratings end-to-end.

BJ

Quick answer; I loved it! You have amazing skill as a story teller. I’ve been trying to make my way thru your stories. I want to add my request to the many others for continuation of the Single Doc story; ala “Tony”.

As a lifer Navy man, I really enjoyed the reference to Military bases and personnel I am familiar with. Very pleased to see you are still providing more of your talents for us all to read. Thanks for your efforts and please give a thought to my request.

Great story. Don’t keep us hanging. Chapter 2 please.

Started to give a 5*. But saw no Ch. 2. So let’s stick with a 2*.

So hot there must be more.

Hey Doc, we need some more on this! I’m hooked just from the first chapter.

Chapter 2?

Chapter 2 get lost along the way?

This is frustrating. You just wrote this and now I have to wait for the next chapter. Damn. I was really getting into it. Ok, I will calm down and watch for the next chapter.

non member reader since 98. This story should be moved forward. There are so many ways it could move forward, and has a compelling hook to keep readers interested.

I should have added to my previous message, that having enjoyed Audiobook with my Granddaughter, brought me to explore your body of work. I keep a log of writers to enjoy after I read the days new stories, then look at the list compiled of people to. explore further As a caregiver to the elderly in my family, it helps to fill the hurry up and wait tie.

This was an enjoyable, if slightly unbelievable, read. However, 19+ months without an ending is just sad. Please finish the story. Writers who abandon a story that is well received are a mystery to me, since it tends to frustrate your audience.

Great first chapter, but it deserves a 2nd chapter at a minimum.

Definitely needs Chapter 2, probably 3 and 4 as well. Five stars!

A SUDDENLY SINGLE DOC CH. 01. I really enjoyed this! However, looking at the date I see you must have not wanted to continue. Too bad, with Julie on the horizon and the upcoming trifecta with Claire, it leaves a great deal unfinished.

C'mon!!

Where's the next three Chapters??

I agree, You need to keep on this story. I am sure there all all types of girls that want to experience that 5+ rating for themselves. Plus there is that one girl that he has to work for. thanks for the story

You CANNOT leave this storyline hanging out there! We need more 🔥

Damn you hooked me and then left me hanging. You have been doing great work. Can this story get more? Thanks for feeding my sex dreams. Mike

Please continue this story. Thank you.

More!