by nosebone
I hope they are eventually going to have a fuckfest between Him and his two girl cousins.
Another story which starts with much promise.. and does not deliver... Is this some kind of torture you're inflicting on readers..? You were doing so well...!
This was much better than the first chapter. I hope you let Jeannie and Katie offer their virginity to Tim.
They need a kind and loving man usher them into womanhood.
it started a little slow - but in a "coming of age" story thats expected. its well-written, and the characters are getting well-developed. i always think one of your strongest skills is writing dialogue - it always seems so real - and that's very true here. i'm now going to read chapter 3 - lookinf forward to it!