All Comments on 'A Summer of Slow Transition Ch. 08'

the transition is complete, lovely story. Can't wait for more. Not sure how I feel about Jonathan though. Unless Bob thinks it's fine.

i can`t wait another parts

An absolutely wonderful story. Well contracted and written. Your story content is splendid and you bring each character to life with their own personality. Love it! Keep up the good work. Thanks 5 star throughout.

I am enjoying this series.

Can't wait for more and to see what happens when Bob gets home.

BTW to the poster above, who's Jonathan?

very good writing, next chapter please!

and he will be well endowed too;)

I think the story is quite good overall just one thing that makes me wonder is when some of the characters speak. Mostly pam in this one. She sometimes speak like a very young person and sometimes like a very old person. I find that part is a bit confusing and it is something you should consider in order to make the continuation of the story better. It could be explained that she is sometimes speaking like she was older and more mature but I do not feel like the text is doing that.

Other might not agree but I think making sure each character have their own characteristics and way of communicating would help the story. I do understand that writing a long story over several chapters can be difficult and that sometimes small mistakes happen.

I still gave it a solid 5 because I do not want to discourage a great story.

Keep up the good work

When is the next chapter?

Shame to see it has stopped!

Hi!

I really enjoyed your series, it was great!

I like the realistic development of the characters, for example the wife being a little bit shy, a little bit reluctant

Keep up the good work!

when can we expect next episodes of this fantastic story? please have mercy!

I appreciate your kind comments, and am happy to see that you all have enjoyed the story thus far. In answer to those that didn't want it to end, let me say that I'm working on the final chapter of this series, and hope to continue with the same characters only it will be the following summer, in my next story. So all I can say is that the next chapter in this one will be hopefully SOON !!!

Hank ?

Jonathan the Curlew ?

orgies ?

gangbang ?

Did you just tell us that Pam is a little slow on the uptake? Her limited abilities are why she has become a whore? Is that what you are saying? I guess that is as good a reason as any! lol

hmmm, we like pam,, she a fun girl, sexually mature and swinging at such a young age, good for her, usually women dont become enlightened until after 20 or 30 years of marriage and bordem has taken over!