All Comments on 'A Summer's Day'

Damn. 1 of the best anal stories I've read in a while. Nicely detailed from . looking forward to reading more of your work.

3 stars

DragonRider55

A number of grammatical errors for a teacher.

A sexy erotic anal story......enjoyed it very much.....a real turn on.

Looking forward for more escapades with these two couples.

I write while drunk (and/or high) as shit. So while I'd like to be perfect, fuck grammar and your issues with it! The English language is continually evolving so a grammar or spelling rule now may be archaic tomorrow. That, and I'm gonna miss some things I'm embarrassed about (did I use the wrong "there/their/they're"?) I think erotica will drive the grammar rules of tomorrow. Plus, as mentioned in the comment title, fuck off! I got off from my fantasy, so, success! Time for another whiskey.

You have to write another chapter with these two couples.Especially having Kate doing anal for the first time maybe even brave enough for a DP later on in another chapter after that.Again great story.