All Comments on 'A Sunday Morning Tryst'

This story has been done numerous times before and I must say, much better. A suggestion might be to learn a bit more about a mature woman's body before you tackle another like this. I gave it a two, it was headed toward a 4 but there were just too many errors, for instance. How can she be laying on her side with her legs spread? Think about it, this is supposed to be a 60 plus woman. At least it wasn't another worthless cuck story, kuddos for that. Keep trying, you'll get there.

Enjoyed this story. It takes the scenario many have enjoyed of watching a beautiful woman in a coffee shop to the hoped for conclusion.

It was a little rushed at the end with the back story and could have benefitted from some editing. But overall a great start

4* PB

Thanks for sharing.