All Comments on 'A Surprise Birthday Present'

Outstanding in every aspect. A MUST READ, for sure!A very potent May-September love story that is very decent.

Very, very nice story!

Great love story with a not too surprising ending which did not detract from the timber of the relationship.

Both received and gave their all.

It's the mixture of both extreme erotica and pure love. I got really absorbed into the scene. Great detailed dialogues are also my favourite. I hope one day I could achieve a story which is as good as this one. Very hot and passionate sex scene. Totally educational.

Thanks.

another jem.....

a well written and well received erotic story

Great story. Love does not have age to effect it. The story was well written and just a joy to read. Well done. Thank you.

Delightful story thoughtfully written. It made my evening.