All Comments on 'A Surprise Encounter Ch. 01'

I like the way you have started this story only complaint is only one page, I was left with the towel at my feet and my girl smiling as she walked through the door. The outside door not the bedroom, oh well I do hope that I got that last bit wrong cant wait for your next post.

I uploaded it incorrectly and left off the back half of the chapter. I just submitted chapter 2 for review. Sorry, newbie here. Lol.

It's still a good start!

Be sure to check back, I have big plans for these two. Chapter 2 has already been submitted!