- Incest/Taboo
- A Surprise for Son
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All Comments on 'A Surprise for Son'
by brooke
- 16 Comments
Anonymousabout 13 years agoAnd a surprise for your readers. Bloody hell, put a warning on this shit.
max052about 13 years agoI wouldn't have thought a story like this would be my cup of tea, but I was hot through pretty much the whole story. Will follow the storyline if it continues. Great writing, great story! Max052
cheryl_4funabout 13 years agoi agree what a surprise but it wass great and a real turn on
i loved it
Anonymousabout 13 years agoThis should be in another category than this; besides the totally shallow, loveless sex, the key scenes were straight homo-erotic and thus not part of the category readers were expecting. Rated as a straight sex story, it was very poor and way off target...
guy30about 13 years agoDon't listen to the homophobes! Not only was this story a great piece of work, it definitely belongs in the incest section. If they don't want to read this kind of story they should learn to check the tags.
Just so we're clear. If you don't continue this story I will kill myself and haunt you for the rest of your days. ;)
Anonymousabout 13 years agoIn the wrong category, the story was a complete turn off. Biggest load of rubbish I have ever read on the site.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoIf you want to write gay stories then more power to ya but lable it correctly so those of us that don't want to read that crap don't waste our time.
brookeabout 13 years agoAuthorIf you're going to leave bad feedback, get your facts right. If you read more than the first chapter then you'd find out that this contains INCEST. Hence it's in the INCEST category.
Always makes me laugh when people are happy to think about fucking a family member (definitely against your backward traditions) but not a little gay action!
Oh, and if you don't like it then check the tags before reading the story. I typed them in for a reason.
Grow up.
ken0001almost 12 years agoI may not be as straight as I thought I was... Or maybe its just good writting..
ladyannawover 8 years agoI should be so lucky with a surprise as such. Keep writing....!
