All Comments on 'A Surprise Homecoming Pt. 01'

But this story lacked any sexual tension and was totally unbelievable. Sure, I understand it is just a fantasy, but a good story has a setup, transition, and a payoff.

You skipped the transition and went straight to the payoff. The father would have been shocked. Some coercion for him would have added some excitement, but any eroticism disappeared when the daughter stated: 'Mom, can I play with Dad's cock?' There was no build up.

I hope you take this constructively and use it to fuel your next story.

another soon !!!!!

I don't care about any transitions, whatever. I mean go to the library and pull a book from the shelf, this is where you'll find a book written with all the propers. I loved it, I just got into the fantasy of having sex with your wife, daughter, and his mom. Now that was hot. Keep them coming Uncle Wayne.

Love the family fucking .

Can’t wait for the next chapter and who was Susan letting fuck her seeet ass