All Comments on 'A Surprising First'

GREAT STORY VERY EROTIC GREAT WRITING EXCELLENT STORY.

NOW THE FOLLOW UP PART.

For once straight erotic lit turned me on. Great story. Can't wait for more! :)

Aside from the blooper about how she soaked HER sheets (they were his sheets lol) this story was perfect start to finish! Great job!

That was a great first story that you wrote. I like the way you described the way that Ben took Chloe's virginity. I also like the way you described the friendship between the two of them and that she wanted him to take her virginity. I can hardly wait to see what you do with them in the next chapter which I hope you write soon.

Fantastic job for your first time. The descriptions were incredible. You have a great future ahead of you!