All Comments on 'A Surprising Journey Ch. 01'

All this talk of rolling around in hay makes me want to go out and do the same.

I'm definitely going to read the rest of this series. I'm curious to see where Thom's adventure takes him.

The dialog at the beginning was well-written and believable. When they actually start fucking though there are too many repetitive capital letters which are supposed to indicate intense pleasure, wild passion, etc. They don't. They just make the page look like an email from someone who doesn't know that it's rude to write in all caps.

Also, nothing is made of their smoking dope (how does it feel?) except that they smoked it.

That said, this has the makings of a damn hot story. I'd like to taste Maggie's cunt myself.

Looking forward to his return to the farm.

Sue, in Seattle.

Great story. You are gifted. There were a couple of typos but who gives a shit. Send me directions to Maggie's farm. She just might be my neighbor!