All Comments on 'A Surprising Trip Next Door'
by CrossedAngel42
- 26 Comments
UAlbanyGirl518almost 2 years agoOmg what a great story. The title caught my eye and I’m glad it did. Most writers don’t put enough thought into their titles, but yours compelled me to click thru. So we’ll written and hot, and hopefully the first of many chapters to cum. 5 stars for sure.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoDisregard what the other poster said, this was fucking great and I can't wait for the next one! and yes, totally plausable! In fact it's happened in real life!
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoGood intentions but a weak storyline and how is this incest? Bc a small mention of the wife being fucked by her father in a video. Weak
sp9983almost 2 years agoGreat story, simple and to the point. No wasted pages filled with unnecessary bs.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoMaybe so, but let's have a Chapter 2 with Mom coming home and showing our babysitter what girls can do . . . .
Leviathan101almost 2 years agoGreat story. Hope there is more to come. Ignore the negative comments, notice how they’re all from anonymous accounts because they are pussies.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoWhat's a matter , didn't you read the first page ? yes incest did play a role in the story .
Anonymousalmost 2 years agowrong catagory and 'no' it never happened in real life. what a dweebe storyline, super stupid...........
Anonymousalmost 2 years ago"lifted her hips as he drug them away from her freshly"
Why exactly would he dope up A pair of panties? Do they have anxiety? Are they cheap skid row panties that trade drugs for sex?
Why ruin a decent story with lazy grammar?
Anonymousover 1 year agoAbsolutely preposterous, and with some problematic writing, but still quite arousing.
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