by Pimanko
Honestly I'm a bit disappointed this time. While I didn't have great expectations on the Peru trip episodes (and instead I got really pleasantly surprised about how you developed the story) I was looking for this one to come and instead found it a bit like a filler. Not a big problem, after 17 episodes isn't easy to find good plots. Anyway, I'm looking forward for the next one, seems interesting.
You're doing a great job.
You are very perceptive. I am running out of plot ideas (although this happened to me around chapter 6 and then suddenly a few more ideas came to me). As things stand, I will likely end this story with Chapter 20.
I do have another story up my sleeve based on some ideas suggested by a Literotica reader. I promised him I'd develop the story as soon as I finish this one. I intend to keep my promise.