All Comments on 'A Swinging Odyssey'

I've read many stories about married couples making the decision to become swingers, but never in such an analytical way. It's an interesting premise, and you've captured my attention. I look forward to future installments.

One slight critique is that your dialog seems almost robotic at times. For example: "Yes dear, because I myself take no interest in submission. But you could still be submissive without me being one. In fact, submission doesn't work without dominance. My results show I have a mild inclination toward dominance. So our inclinations are complementary."

I can almost picture a robot speaking those words in some bad sci-fi movie. Or maybe a character like Spock or Sheldon from the Big Bang Theory.

You should put in that she's Asian from the beginning so I don't waste my time reading it.

I'm glad you liked my suggestions, and worked on the few things here and there. The story reads well enough. I see that the this chapter hasn't received high ratings, but that was to be expected, as this is non-erotic in content and sets the theme for your story.

Keep up the good work!

To Anonymous (Didn't Like The Asian Thing): Well, shit-for-brains, this is interracial category. He is free to include whichever race he wishes. The name Aiko should strike as an Asian one, but I guess your low thinking capacity proved itself here.

Think before you post your worthless comment elsewhere.

Love this so far. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️