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All Comments on 'A Tale for the Middle Ages Pt. 05'

by cerrotorre

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tennesseeredtennesseeredabout 8 years ago
Very fine storyteller

I've not read lesbian fiction before but in the previous chapter the author made it both believable and hot. Now he's doing it again. How this is going to end is anyone's guess, which is one of the marks of a good writer. Some editing errors, sure, but overall a great first effort. More, please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
You are good!

I'm quite satisfied! Thanks.

Ravey19Ravey19almost 2 years ago

Wasn't expecting him to go all animal on her, especially after the three had talked.,Wonder how it's going to end.

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Dear readers, Part 8 and the final chapter of A Summer of Submission has been submitted for review. In it, Julie's friend comes for a visit and arrives earlier than expected. A big surprise awaited. I hope you enjoy it. From some of the comments I gather this story is no...