All Comments on 'A Tale of Ants and Termites'

I don't mind the reconciliation aspect at the end of the story, but it was waaayyy too abrupt to be credible. I think that this was yet another example of writer's fatigue, in which the author just runs out of steam at the end, and throws an ending out the window as he drives away.

Sorry JPB this was not your best story . GW . If the wife had told her husband then gone and had her blood for tested for the rape drug . Plus the wife had no faith in her husband

I have read more than a few of JPB's stories and he reminds me of a wannabe Matt M. with all his reconciliations with a true slutty wife where most men would divorce the slut. This is of course just my opinion of his scribble on Lit.

I have a hard time understanding WHY, he would ever want her near him again. Obviously, she is a whore. Maybe not the first time; when she was drugged... But, all the other times it was for the money. 3 stars, barely. Thanks for writing the story though.

This exciting story is worth 5 stars!

Nope

very poor ending to up until then a good story

Are you out of your head presenting that ending.

only a brain dead husband or reader could accept that ending. A husband would not only not allow her into his house but not ever again into his life..You really hurt this story with this and him continuing to have sex with her for months knowing what she was doing.Wow disappointed in you for that...3stars..

good story dislike end

What a simp! Lmao!

Would have been better if she turned out to be an assassin

Ah.... NO - the whore does not get back in the house or relationship of any kind. Just plain weird dude.

Great story until the end. Who on God's green earth would let their whorin' wife back into the house in the first place and why end it that way. At first I thought it was a two parter, but I was wrong. I am going to just walk away shaking my head.

the most egregious cuckold story ive ever read .

negative 10 stars

Terrific story, a hopeful ending! *****

An interesting tale. Right up until the end. I can't believe ANY man would let the whore back in. 4 stars

I gave this story 3 Stars . Why didn't the wife trust and love her husband enough to tell him what happened

Date rape drugs don’t turn a woman into a sexual aggressor; they lowers one’s inhibitions and makes one more susceptible to erotic suggestion. Not a very good story and certainly not believable.

Reread. Bob is an excellent writer. This one is always a joy to revisit

Started put great then really petered out...2

Iy was all going great, until the very end, when he took the whore back. By doing this, he confessed being a voyeur and a cuckold.

A mystery story that was boring,

2 for the ending. Ir'S is not Conceivable that he would have anything to do with her...

SHE IS TO LEAVE IMMEDIATELY.

UNDERSTAND, ASSHOLE?

Good story, but never take the bitch back in a thousand years.

Seems to be trend, she walks easy and gets off while he gets burned to hell?

Enjoyed it. It was made all the more sweet by the number of knotted panties belonging to all the anonymous trolls

I LOVED THIS STORIE,GIVEIT 5 STARS A SIDE NOTE IF I MY I WISH YOU WOULD PUT OUT A LIST OF ALL YOUR AUTHORS .IT WOULD MAKE IT EASER TO GO FIND MORE OF THERE STRIES. SORRY ABOUT PUTTING THIS IN THE REPLEY. BUT DID NOT SEE ANOTHER WAY TO ASK FOR THIS LIST TO BE AVAILABLE .........THANK YOU.

On his bio page the author claims he does not care about the readers.

Now I believe it! The story is unfinished and there was no sequel. It was a great story, but no ending left me upset.

Suggestion: Don't waste time with "Just Plain Bob!" unless you like to be left hanging

Right up to the ending this had 5 stars all over it. Why take the whore back. She can not ask for the fuck money back in court because the IRS would be all over it. Yes she got Rape the first time . But after that it was all on her. She could move to Las Vegas and become a very high paid call girl. I over look the part where he got the sloppy sconds in the shower from her. Why spend anytime with someone you do not trust?

Far fetched but not bad

Story was great til end. ONCE A CHEATER A:WALWAYS A CHEATER. Nothing else needs to b said

One for the "Best of JPB" awards.

Ditch her, she made her choice, so fuck her over under threat of exposure. She signs and walks

Old but I did like the ending and no I'm not a cuckold.

Enjoyed the story. Thanks for your writing.

JPB another great story from one of the masters! Sure she was dumb but aren't the hottest women always. If it was me I would have taken her with me to the Caribbean to live alone just the two of us. On obviously they both loved each other, she was blackmailed into putting out. AND IT DIDN'T HURT HER PUSSY to get some extra dick. 5 stars to JPB

you write well,but your themes tend towards making men accept cheating and wives who are actually sluts.Try for a bit more realistic stories.

Ultra cuck .

How disgusting .

One star

I enjoy detective stories…the mystery, the search, the discovery etc., and found this one very enjoyable. Well written except for the ending. I felt the ending too brief, leaving some raised issues ignored. The lack of detail did not match the rest of the story. I do wonder who wound up with all that expensive surveillance equipment, though, (it was really only implied). IMO, Rob should have been the one to own it.

Although enjoyable, there were a number of unresolved issues and a poor ending, and so I gave this story only 4 stars.

Some thoughts:

After I rate a story I most always read the comment section…there certainly is a lot to learn from how others feel! I am very interested in authoritarianism, and the public’s belief in the ownership of another person…be it your parents, siblings, children, or your spouse (the government and religion ownership are for another response.) With ownership comes rules, regulations and how we must live our lives. Our actions, (like what we wear, how we talk or the prejudices we hold dear,) are based on cultural demand…not our individual choice. Judgement, with a response reward or punishment, is the respons to an ownership based life. Morals and ethics, right or wrong, and the whole way we must appear, are set by other people and groups, (which we unquestioningly accept,) for their benefit and not ours. Our individuality, in a system built on ownership, is an illusion. The fantasized and propagandized “meritocracy’ is a scam.

Loving Wives presents a great look into the world of people-owning-people. The serious judgmentalism expressed, with overblown reactions of hate, violence and revenge is fascinating, as well as fun to read. It would appear story ratings are based around how much of these negative feelings are expressed. The old and wise saying; “if you seek revenge…dig two graves,” is not well understood in the hearts and minds of the ownership-hooked, judgmental revenge seekers.

Nor does the saying that states “the best revenge is to have enough self worth not to seek it.” Now that is something to think about, Eh!…Self Worth…

Merlin

A good read

I really like the below remark from eljj546

Well I'm anonymous eljj However I rarely leave bad remarks.

Yes I understand you may never read this. Some others remarks are far out of ordinary.

eljj546

eljj5463 months ago

Anonymous assholes

I just love the anonymous people that leave bad comments on here. All because they're too chickenshit to register for a name and too chickenshit because they can't write a story.

A very dramatic story, enjoyable and very well written. The ending was a little ridiculous, there is no way any man (husband) would let her back in the house after what she had done, continued to do and take money for. A remote possibility if she would have come clean after she was drugged at the cocktail party. At that point she could have been tested to support her story/excuse. But she decided to begin a life of lies, deceit, unfaithfulness and prostitution. Kick her ass to the curb and introduce all of the other men in her life to an aluminum baseball bat.

Why did you just have to ruin it with the raac? She says she was blackmailed but she willingly gave him sloppy seconds. That was her choice, something she did for her lover, and yes, the moment what she did was not because she was forced she became complicit. Therefore the only thing she has become is a cheating, unfaithful, coniving, backstabbing whore.

While all he has become is a willing cuckold, he knew he was getting sloppy seconds and went ahead with it. Sure he showed a little backbone but not enough to burn them all to the ground. He should have gone to the DA and the following civil suit against the bastards that belittled them would have netted him a whole of a lot more money, revenge and satisfaction.

Furthermore, through his choices, he allowed others to be cheated. He knowingly allowed the wives and children of the assholes to be exposed to who knows what diseases, to be lied to, to be betrayed.

No backbone whatsoever in this waste of space!

Garbage! 1 star.

I just love the anonymous people that leave bad comments on here. All because they're too chickenshit to register for a name and too chickenshit because they can't write a story.

So many faggots must be an English thing.My dad said English men were all gay

You have such a lousy way of (well actually for the knuckle dragging types as good way) of passing off a cuck story as something else.

It fails if anyone has the sense of a slug to recognize it, sadly the BTB crowd lacks much in that department. To the point it rivals the cuckies.

You truly suck at it, you must be a cum guzzler who beats his meat sitting next to odoreater watching those Trump neo-Nazi rallies.

The fact so many if your protagonists knowingly fuck their wives knowing they have another man's come inside them says it all.

Again the people that run you down in comments have never written a single story here. Seemed pretty good to me.

Jesus Christ I’m so sick and tired of the “yeah, I still loved her with all my heart” bs! And she fucks snd fucks snd fucks but he’ll still take her back? Ridiculous! What do these sluts have to do before these cucks see the writing on the wall?

"I told her I would try and I will. I will try really hard."

For God's sakes WHY?

Imagine the cesspool of venereal diseases this dumb faithless bitch has now?

I will never for the life of me EVER figure out how a man could put his dick into the cunt of his wife right after another man has cum inside of it? Sloppy seconds is repulsive.

...and then the author reverts to type in the last paragraph, totally not needed, should have gone with the divorce

Liked it until she got a 2nd chance. Remember, she kept doing it for the money. 3/5 … in hindsight should have been less.

only retards can be blackmailed which make blackmail stories stupid u seem to like that theme a bit too much makes a person wonder

holy mother of god u RAAC it lol wow im sorry bad that is just plain bad almost everything in this story was unbelievable

Truly a sad live story.

why the wait, why did he fuck her with another mans cum in her thats the part of the story where he s AIDS and dies in hospice care. that first fuck vid should have had him at a divorce lawyers office. and then he finds more and stays with her and fucks her. this guy is too dumb to have lived that long

We hadn't had an argument in years. thats bad no arguments in years between hubby and wife means someone doesnt care enough to argue which most likely means theres no love

A cuck story by a cuck writer

With some of the things you put in the story there is no way any husband would have let her back into his life. Love your writing but not the ending of this story.

From a fan

I read this for a second time to see if it would fit into something I was thinking of starting, but my comments are to a few of the readers below. My apologies to JPB for venting on his page; it could have been anyone's.

To the vile anonymous assholes,

How dare you write such cruel and demeaning comments that personally attack the authors of this site. What the fuck is wrong with you people that you can do such a thing. I swear to god, this really shows how fucking sad and pathetic your lonely lives must be. Human cruelty really shows itself when anonymity is the rule, and that does not bode well for the human race. But let me say this for your own good; you better pray to god that you cowards stay hidden because one day you will piss off the wrong person, and that will be that, no matter how much you beg.

What SHITTTTTTT of a ending. Is he so hard of her pussy that he going to ignore all the cock that has been inside her all this time. Jeeeeezzzz what cuckold husband.

At least it’s not the same story over and over. It did become weird and implausible, though.

Total complete lack of trust, respect, communication, false love and immense stupidity. A very horrific and sad story that is so distasteful that it hurt to try and read thru it.

The story also left out so much of the revenge against the four known cocks by their wives and employers. Also nothing was tracked down or exposed or revenged against about the other three cocks - knowing that the blackmailed slut obviously knew who they were. Nothing like leaving a huge hole in the story. So where did the slut wife get all the expensive spy gear and how much money did she use out of her stash to have it installed by who????? Lots left hanging out there making a very incomplete story.

Not your best developed and throughly written story, and rather disappointing.

SW

Nope! Great story until he let the slut back in his house.. If she was raped, she should have reported it or at least told her husband. Letting the whore back just made him a cuck and a pussy. Turns it into a 1 star piece of crap!

I would have sent copies of the tapes to everyone in town.

I was a swinger with my first wife Karen. She was also a topless dancer at the brass rail. I also had during the course of my life several girl friends that were whores, and others that I just liked to share. My point is that when the woman you love fucks other men it usually isn't going to hurt that pussy any. Unless they are carrying some disease. Usually their pussy gets better in every way. So I never felt that I didn't want that pussy anymore cuz someone else used it. Communication is the key to a strong relationship. So to me I would have taken her back if she had cried, proved she loved me with 10 gauge nipple rings and some tattoos of my choosing. Maybe cuz I like sloppy seconds. 5 stars Bob

No legal repercussions, sad. Rape of anyone is a serious matter and not taken lightly. even in fictitious writings.

For some unknown reason, to me, I did not care for the ending. Therefore my rating.

1 star - first last and always - RAPE is never acceptable. There should have been criminal charges laid in the story.

Every man who rapes, needs their appendage removed with a rusty spoon, so it will hurt more and become infected. I wonder how many more authors on this website are going to use the 'date rape drug' to justify their RAAC crap stories?

I was very disappointed in my head I was hoping that it was going to be like Sarahwithlove said. A CIA or FBI operation.

Bob , what part of the story deals with the arrest of the men who raped the MCs wife. In your self righteous misogynist btb rage did it slip your mind?

Maybe its a guy thing but this sort of shit is just evil.

Disappointing. Claiming she did it for him is pure BS. She became a corporate whore, taking money to provide her nest egg. It stopped becoming about them as a couple and about her protecting her future. I can't believe he took her back. I would never trust her again.

This really is one of JPB's best stories. As I read her explanation, I could not help but think what a blessing a brave and morally centered wife can be. She was raped the first time. To have a wife stand up, tell her husband, and go after after her rapists makes this wife look horribly weak by comparison.

JPB often uses "I have to take her back because she is madly in love with me."

That is ok but he is using it so often that it has become just another banality. Plot had a good promise but ended up some type of vanilla. Not a bad story.

Wow I thought it would be a CIA or FBI sting operation or that her husband's life was on the line, but she just wanted to get to $100,000 and that isn't enough for me. No chance in hell. Love only goes so far.

How could he let her come back, convoluted thinking and no excuses. One time maybe and prosecute on the date rape but fucking to cover up fucking? I don't think so. Average story, the cloak and dagger stuff started good sound like espionage with all the high end electronics but turned out to be a pimping busines

I believe she loves him also and went through hell on whether or not to tell him when the cocktail party event first happened. But to continue it and then tell him her mind set was to stop after she reached her goal of $100,000. Sorry, that is a whore.

I keep forgetting JPB is a widdle wee wee wanker. I have to remember to stop riding the dumpster fires he writes.

Fucked up the whole story with the ending! 1 star.

This is one of saddest that I've read on this venue . I managed to read it all and I'm sorry I did . Nothing but sploog and smegma all over . There was very little content to keep anybody interested !

High Tech equipment that only the Government can afford? Then, it's an espionage thing and he stumbled into it. The only reason she was married to him was for deep cover. She's really a Government undercover agent and dummy was about to blow her cover..Her targets. the people he was associated with in Business in an operation he knew nothing about..

His Wife Has Sex with 7 Guys and He takes her Back .. I know what Fiction is Now . I Sure would not take My Girlfriend back after She had Sex with the Basketball Team while We were Married . I am kind of funny that way

I was thinking a 5 until your final shoe dropped and the wife returned to the happy home. Oh well, just my opinion.

Wish old Bob would finish a few stories. Surely he wouldn't take her back, even if he halfway believes her sad story about blackmail.

Words cannot express, the disappointment I have with this story.

1. So the house is under video surveillance with a state of the art, govt only computer.

2. I am sure millions of dollars are at stake

3. The guys who are involved basically settle out of court. The fact that she was given a date rape drug, is never even brought up to the police.

4. So all involved lose some money, and their jobs. But the wife and husband are never even threatened with retribution.

5. The husband let’s her move back in. As long as he gets his money settlement, it’s all good.

I think “ bob” is pretty good at coming up with story ideas. But he needs to get someone else to write them, or at least co- author them. I kinda think he starts the stories with a glass of Jack Daniels. After the third glass, he is tired, and just wants to end it.

Bogus ending.

Are you fucking kidding me? Taking her back? It went way beyond blackmail when she took sloppy seconds to her husband! 1 star!

The Police called the mugger The Testicle Crusher because that is what the mugger did, he crushed the testicles of his victims.

Gaynor's assault was the worst of them all. His balls weren't just crushed they were removed as was his penis. He now pisses into a bag through a tube.

The other men never had sex again. I had found out the names of the other men involved and paid someone to do the deed. Gaynor, however I personally did the damage to him.

AND she sounded like an enthusiastic participant. Take her back N.F.W.

As the details of the equipment being used came out & definitely as it was revealed that sensitive government contracts were involved, I was expecting Bob to bring in the F.B.I. as he already had more than enough to prove her infidelity and to distance himself from possible seriously criminal activity .

I can't agree with the ending - those visions of her doing other men will roll through his mind forever if he does not find a good woman to shove Mandy's memory to the far corners of his brain.

I agree with anonymous on 09-03-20. He is the biggest wimp on this planet, he might as well suck off her lovers himself. I have read lots of your stories and this one is good until the ending. The ending changes my vote from a 5* to1*.

the biggest fucking wimp on this planet, he might as well suck off her lover;s himself.

Yeh puzzlING why she didn't tell her husband she was raped. My nan always said never marry a good looking woman cos you will be looking over your shoulder all your life. Strange I thought but as I'm older I understand her messege. Don't give yourself a reason to doubt.

She is working for sluts R Us and he is working for dipshits R Us

I'm curious about Gaynor's surveillance, and why Rob didn't go to the US Attorney. Without his permission it was illegal as hell. After all corporate espionage is a federal crime, and has pretty severe punishments.

Mandy's justifications for not telling her husband just don't hold water. Her reasoning, logic, and actions tell a whole different story than what she presented to Rob. I don't think she was sorry about what she did even though it was under duress, only that she got caught. At no time did she go to someone and try to figure a way out of this mess, which tells me she enjoyed it to much.

She had to be incredibly stupid to dig herself in so deep!! She obviously got into it, when money was offered and accepted. That's when a business deal was struck. Hence the playful and passionate coupling with various men. She was well on the way to becoming an accredited whore! She had gone too far. Well written. 5*s.

Are people really that stupid? She was raped, and instead of going to the authorities or her husband, decided to continue on walk right into the extortion racket? I would have a hard time buying that story.

Poor CUCK bastard!!! At least he got paid by her Johns.

Go straight to hospital "I was raped with drugs."

I was raped, so to prevent you from divorcing me for being raped (because you are an evil soulless bastard) I had to keep having sex with all those men