All Comments on 'A Tale of Flatulus, God in Exile'

Laughed my ass off. Hope to see more.

Very Thorne Smith. Gods have a sexlife as well as a nightlife.

And perhaps May should find somebody in the office for Bureaucrasis? There's bound to be a nice lady bureaucrat in the office who could teach him the rules for earthly sex.

Lue

Terrific writing. Fun.

Loved it, and greatly enjoy your writing style! More please, and soon!

Very good! It was like Douglas Adams reloaded.

Thank you.

Brilliant, what we need in lockdown, really good laugh, more please. 5 stars of course.

I love how you straddled the line between irreverent wit and genuine human connection. It's so rare to read something that is both funny and actually sexy!

“But she felt a smile trying to usurp the frown's real estate.“

If it pleases you... I’d like to lick the ink off of your fingertips.

Fun, irreverent, sexy, and bewildering, just like life but with a Buffy Vamp Slayer kinda vibe. Well done and really interesting. More?

Just perfect, an absolute joy to read. The whole story flowed perfectly.

Nakedly delightful!

Thank you

Hilarious and wonderful! Though I do wonder if you were trolling us readers with the constant misspelling of Flatulus to amuse yourself whilst we laughed at the story. Full on 5 stars though, ignoring the random spelling of our protagonist’s name it was very well written in pretty much all respects, definitely a diamond in the rough for me.

A light-hearted romp, but your craft is beautiful. Thank you.

That was fun. Thanks.

If this story was posted on another site where one can leave comments, a line of little red hearts would have greeted you. For the sake of being prudent, I'll improvise - hart, hart, hart times 20!

Very imaginative, fun and you show you are a great student of human behavior.

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