All Comments on 'A Tale of Timothy Ch. 03'

Antwan seems to have his priorities sorted! lol

Fantastic! The methodical build up and dynamics being created between the characters is perfection. Can't wait for more.

These kind of writers just go on and on about doing it in the ass. Lol

Really love this story

I love the slow build up and I hope you write many chapters

Maybe next lunch Darnell will stay and flirt with Jen and hopefully all will go to the pool and Jen can see what the guys are packing in their speedos

chapters are way too small, this drags at extremely slow pace. Not sure what the length of this story is based on what has been presented so far. These first three pages could have been in one entry. Keep up at this pace you will lose readership. You don't even have a story hook presented to drive one to be excited about coming back to read further. best wishes.

Story sounds interesting, especially given the number of white girls who are looking for a Black daddy to keep them happy. Would lover to see what might happen when Jennifer's parents drop by after church for lunch and get to met Jennifer's mom seems like she'd make an excellent addition to his crib and as for her husband it's already pretty clear he'd make an excellent cuckold.

I'm losing interest in this fast.

Well page 2 was a bit of a waste lol. Persevering with this because I presume you'll provide something that reads quite sexy when it comes to it !

Nice beginning. looking forward to more chapters. Hopefully Cherry loves to deepthroat as well as do anal.

One of the best stories I‘ve read in the last months

Waiting for more chapters

Very well done; like the build up; will timmie be taken by cheerie before or after or at the same time as his wife is?

Reminds a bit of in a new neighborhood by no questions asked, hope it goes that way as in hot wife can’t resist bbc and white husband can’t fight his new bi bbc urges, white couple gets into trouble, really great so far, build up and background, really feel like I know the characters and Cherry and Jenn are both really hot, please continue

Really love it so far, keep the build, maybe have Cherry show Jenn some bbc porn or have Jenn see a naked pic of Antwain and the images gets into the sweet wives head, please continue love a strong hot black guy getting telling a white chick to eat his ass, that’s a button pusher for me, please continue

Hope Antwain gets Jenn filled up with his load and Timmy eats her clean? But do it in away where Tim doesn’t realize it’s Antwain jizz that tastes so good till after Jenn confesses or after Tim over hears a conversation with Jenn and Cherry, My God Cherry, I felt so guilty, having Tim eating Antwain masculine gifts from out of me, but I’m really confused because he remarked how good it tasted, I mean he said I tasted better than ever? Cherry erupts in laughter

Well done! I really enjoy the slow burn. Slow change, seduction and transformation is more realistic and therefore more hot. The only draw back is you’ll have to keep writing chapter after chapter to develop the story. Don’t lose interest! And ignore the negative hotwife haters on here. You are doing great! Just don’t quit!

Very good!

I soo wanna read how sweet adorable Jennifer sucks Antwains dick balls and eats cum, all things she never wanted to do for Timmy, maybe Ben can come for a visit and have Darnell make him his bitch,

You should get a dvd of bbc for the couple to watch or maybe a pic of Antwain accidentally goes to Jennifer phone, but not by accident, love it can’t wait for more

Pleaaaassee write more, I cant wait to read how this black bull fucks Jennifer. We all need black cock.

I hope Cherry and Antwain plot together to turn Jenn into a bbc craving slut, doing things she’d never image, eating jizz and ass, Darnell works to bring out Timothy layden fag for bbc side

Need a new chapter PLEASE. Hopefully the husband has to go away for business for a few weeks so Cherry and Antwan can corrupt the young wife.

I have some doubts. Is the protagonist's mother-in-law attractive?? you add it to "cuckold". the husband deserves this after his comments. I wonder what kind of approach will be in the protagonist's relationship with his wife after the betrayal (if she hasn't betrayed him before) the wife will humiliate him. I'm really curious about the future of the story, You worked well the first three chapters "preparing the ground" for the story to develop without haste. perhaps this kind of approach makes the story more captivating. I hope the next chapter comes out soon.

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Man, u got me hooked.

I hope that you try something different from the usual cuck trope.

And making Tim just like Harold is no fun at all.

Some reluctance is OK, but forcing Tim is not cuck material, it's more of a betrayal material like NTRmaster stories.

And kindly tone down the bull's "alpha" persona if u can.

It's kind of a turn off. Too much of it ruins the good potential your story Especially towards Tim. Its OK for jen though.

Creampie humiliation, chastity, smell, piss, all kinds of fetishes.

U got a great start. Looking forward to the next chap.

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Why take so long im waiting for next chapter

Don’t get it really? 3 chapters in 3 days then nothing for 6 weeks? Really don’t get that and hope this doesn’t end up like so many others stories that lose the momentum by being stagnant too long, frankly I’m already sick of waiting and if it turns out The wife already did the guy the first chapter that will really be unbelievable and against the whole premise that you laid out about the sweet caring Christian wife that we all want nailed by the black cock

I’m out been checking in once a week but no more, you said you knew the way the story was going yet you haven’t put any of it out, that fine your decision and this is mine, done

great buildup, more please!!

I had a feeling that the author wouldn’t continue/finish this story, the build up was very good and had great potential but as a stand alone story it is worthless, unfortunately this happens and I’m not happy that I was right but I did have a suspicion he wouldn’t finish

Terrible ending!

Let's get the white people fucked. This could be nasty or it could be a bust. Right now it is a bust.

Your work is important to normalizing good sex Timothy. Don’t stop ok?

It surely is a bust, don’t know why authors bother doing this, lazy and a waste of time

Mr Fields? Can you please be courteous enough to give your readers an update? Are you planning on finishing this story? Or are you done? Either way we would appreciate knowing.

Keep goingggggg

I notice it’s been 8 days since a reader asked for an update? I’m guessing that the story won’t be finished seeing that the author isn’t even checking the comments, nor polite enough to respond, this story was a good starting point a good base, but nothing more, it is an absolute waste as a stand alone story

I am sorry to admit I waited most of the winter for this lamé author to continue, but I’m happy to say I won’t waste one day of spring, what a bust of a story and writer, cya

I think another author should be able to take over where this guy left off? Good start but needs a finish and Fields don’t have it in him, love to see another author continue

Please!! We need more. Need to explore Jennifer's potential blackening. Maybe Antawn gets her a job at his club. What happened in those 90 minutes ? Have a chapter or two from Cherry's perspective.

I think author has died.

Authors have a right to stop a story but what makes me mad is that if you go to the story series, it says it was updated May 11 and the author is still actively writing, that is Bull shit

I wanted soo bad for Jen to eat Antwains dick and cum but this author couldn’t finish, I’ll never know why these guys do that, pointless lazy

What story? A no ending story? Thx for nothing.

I see it’s Been 9 months yet story series says the author is still writing? No he’s not,

There wasn’t anything really special nor well written about this story, but I will say the author did get across, give a very special, hot and innocence to the wife Jennifer, that alone made me wait for it to continue. I emailed the author shortly after chapter 3 and he wrote to me that chapter 4 was all but done and he was going to continue on with more. Obviously he didn’t. Why who knows, but that is something I don’t respect, not even a little

WTF there is no page 2 in chapter 3