All Comments on 'A Tale of Twin Tails Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Will he knock them up? I would love that, because way too few stories go that way. Anyway, 5 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow! Just fucking wow!

Fuck! Fuck! And double fuck! Brent and Becky make a helluva team. No doubt she'll have Mom between her legs too, soon. No way this is your first story. It's too hot. If it is indeed so, you are a natural. Five again, and I only wish I could give ten.

Jedd

Jamaman64Jamaman64over 4 years ago
Great Story

I see this is your first submission here. I am betting you have been writing for a long time. This is a great story. I anxiously await the next chapter to see how this unfolds. You have created so many different potential twists and turns. You mentioned in the preface that Chapter 3 was probably rushed a bit.. Remember this, quality will always win over quantity. Well done! 5 Star from me.

Countrylad77Countrylad77about 4 years ago
Will mummy be seduced?

Tune in next time to see if mummy can be seduced by her darling daughters

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