by Iamnotstevebuscemi
phew what an intense story, great writing. excited to see more.
Becky is such an exceptional character. She's devious, cunning and an achiever. You can tell the lust and impatience is getting too much, she's having trouble keeping up now. I think her little plan is going to bite her in the end.
Love the little crumb trails you've been leaving behind with Brent setting up an escape plan, this story is going to implode but we are in it for the journey.