All Comments on 'A Tale of Two Mothers'

Can;t wait to see what punishment you are going to dish out on Julia. Pussy and ass spanking, tied up tits, oh well I will just have to wait.

You take your time to develop the story and tell it well. Like the previous commentor I can hardly wait to see how Julia gets hers, just don't wait too long please. Thank You. Ronnie W.

very well wrote

Good use of inner dialogue and description. Love the build up of the relationship.

can't wait find out what happens, keep it cumming!!!

I have come to realize that you "Brits" are truly the masters at writing "mother-son incest" stories. I can't wait to read the rest of the series. You're the first person I've ever given a 5/best rating to...truly deserved!

round 2 and away we go.

Really hot story, but why are we still waiting for part 2?

good story but wheres part two? he should force that bitch julia to be his wife. fitting punishment if you ask me. knocking her up every year forcing her to carry his children so he can have heirs to run his fathers buisness because you cant let her take the buisness he has to take it by force if necesary. yeah fitting punishment making her walk around knocked up all the time all year round year after year and having to service him and his mother whenver they feel like it. lol oh yeah:)

great story, but wheres part two?

Hot build up. gets you so involved

where is the next part

awesome story, great build up. cant wait for chapter 2

I love this story. I love the build-up, the whole story line, the way it keeps you panting for more. Now, I read this story about maybe 10-12 months ago and left a comment about how forward I was looking to read further parts. You promised it would continue, although I wasn't a member at the time. What happened? You finished all of your other stories. How could you sahatage your own story when it's such a great one as all of your other stories are? - from MusicInMyLife

I think we will be waiting till the cows come home for the author to get off his arse and do the next chapter seeing as how this was written in 2005 - a real pity to leave a story hanging like this

that was a great story, but i am curious to see where the next chapter takes them.

it's a shame part 2 didn't cum.

Thank you rbuchanan for this story. I would have red the shortly following sequel with pleasure (spike)

still waiting for the story to be completed but looks like it never will be..

I really enjoyed the story . But it dose beg to be continued .

12 years dose seems a long time to wait for part two of the story .

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ looking forward to second chapter

Very readable; very believable and very well-paced. Having grown up within a similar situation made the scenario ring true - and that’s important for me as a reader (otherwise I just have to write my own!).

The joys of the innocent youth of yesteryear - each new sexual discovery was a genuine joy to behold, no matter how brief or minor the experience. Happy days.

Well done!

Good story. I have wanked numerous times but hardly ever got my hands covered in semen unless it goes directly upwards. So many authors use that description not just you

considering you wrote ch 01 16 years ago I presume ch 02 is dead

Excellent and I would have liked to have seen a part two...

such a bitch I'd have fallen under her spell instantly. She was an unbelievably sexy woman, didn't stop me wanting to bang the life out of her. 

I wanna fall under the spell of the bitch sexy stepmom bang