All Comments on 'A Tale of Two Paramours Ch. 04'

by Kveldulf

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Prince8351Prince8351over 9 years ago
Magnificent

I can feel the blowjobs being explained in this series myself...I love the detail and the romance. Nice story man, you're the kind of narrators we need on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
This chapter pushes my rating to max

Well, cannot judge how "authentic" Jessis issues are as i am no expert and have not identified her problems, so far. Maybe some relevant experts can shed some light here ... possibly with teh benefit of hindsight?

Anyway, I appreciate the author venturing into a bit off and awkward character and relationship dynamics. This adds some creative twists and turns to the plot. Instead of being puzzled and lost, I was drawn down deeper into this fascinating tale. In my view, this reflects outstandig writing.

THANK YOU!

Hopefully, the following chapters live up to the rising bar of expectactions and the story is complete.

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