All Comments on 'A Tale of Two Paramours Ch. 10'

by Kveldulf

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trent_treschmantrent_treschmanover 9 years ago
Glad She's Back

While I have enjoyed your work featuring Jessi almost as much, it was good to read about Jessika again and Mark cumming inside of her, which I feel he hasn't done much of with her. Thanks for bringing Jessika back and I am almost as relieved as Mark that he didn't end the sexual side of their relationship. This is top shelf work and I continue to look forward to the next chapter, which is something I can't say about many other series that has 10 chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
excellence continues

Excellence continues in this chapter of A Tale of Two Paramours. Plot and romantic love are in exactly the right proportion here, setting the stage for what is to follow, and all superbly told by the author.

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