All Comments on 'A Tale of Two Paramours Ch. 14'

by Kveldulf

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Started strong

Getting weaker

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Still loving it!

Such an enjoyable story with sexy parts and good character development

trent_treschmantrent_treschmanover 9 years ago
Still Going Strong

I guess I can see the first commentor's point of view, but I respectfully disagree. I think this work is still as strong as the opening chapters and you teased the threesome idea and then built up beautifully to it. I hope this is a long way from being over.

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