All Comments on 'A Tale of Two Visits'

Loved this story. Your attention to detail is fabulous. I am certain that your stories will become very popular! Great job Gina!

looking for many more visits---even a helicopter landing now that would scare all the snakes out...

A story that definitely leaves me wanting more. Nice details, and nothing in your face (yet).

Great great work here. Realistic to the point that the readers feels he/she's right there with you>

The mark of a great writer is the ability to make the reader feel as though they are right there in the moment.

Not only did you do that with your memories, but also with your fantasy.

I wish I could find a way to better express my praise of your writing, but I will simply say: Outstanding!

This might be my favorite of the stories you have written so far. I loved it. You have a talent for telling a great story. Thanks for sharing that talent.

that was outstanding GINA Bim going to get married so youll want us ,I bet your a blast ,I really think your writing is wonderful ,such a build up ,and you could imagine everything around by the way you wrote it I give it a 1000 that's with 10 being the highest to my new friend

im Michael j kasm

Gina,

Fantastic story. One could feel the sexual tension between Steve, Becky and Gina. Each paragraph raised the bar and along with it, my arousal. Your writing kept me on edge from the begining to the end. Describing the smell of sex on both you and Becky was very hot. I prefer to read these erotic stories in the nude and at the end of a "Tale of Two Visits", merely touching myself immediatly resulted in a very intense orgasm.

You have a Gift Gina....I truly appreciate your work...especially in this story the sensitivity, passion and genuine love were palatable.

It was a fantastic story and experience. I felt part of it.

Just plain loveable, Gina, and of course arousing. I guess a lot of us imagine ourselves w you. I guess I'm your mirror image, man who enjoys a couple....

Gina I really hope that you can experience this, and go on to write it- as well as part 3,4 and beyond. I'm now moving to "Golden Girls" to learn and enjoy more.

I like the way you tell about Gina exploring her sexuality. We should all be open to the experience and go with it. You tell your stories very well. On to the next one.

Really enjoyed chapter 3

Really enjoyed reading your story! That was very erotic, written in a meek and mild fashion! Congrats on awesome work! Keep at it!