All Comments on 'A Tale on the Trail'

My wife and I are hikers and we are planning to duplicate your trip. Thanks for such a fun story.

What a great story and well crafter, well written, and very well edited - two lovers, mutually respectful and having fun - makes one feel young again!

Loved the story because you included all of my favorites; outdoor sex, enjoying nature, massages, talking about fantasies and just enjoying each others company. Your writing and descriptions are very erotic for me.

It would be great to see where this sort can go from here. Great writing!

A good read. I was hard the whole time. The outdoorsy part reminded me of a special time my wife and I had on a sunny day in a state park. A secluded clearing, a picnic lunch, sliding between two blankets, getting naked, her on top, her big tits bouncing as she rode me, her screaming orgasm, her nipples in my mouth, my cock exploding like a fountain inside her pussy. One of our best days ever! Keep writing, sir!

There is enough build-up for the sex to be realistic. There was enough sharing for the romance to happen that way.

Makes me consider taking up back packing

Your story brought back many memories of my last boyfriend. We are not together now but your story contains so many things we talked about and enjoyed. HE could do amazing things to satisfy me and I miss his great body parts.

Great sexy story. Deserves a follow up!

Wonderful vacation!

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