by JBEdwards
Well, except the lecherous, horny dad! Hot story! Wish I needed another haircut! I definitely want one! I wonder where the local Tiffany cuts hair? Well done, JB! Very revealing! Five stars!
The story was going well until you just had to bring her dad into it. That ruined it for me.
I docked it a star after Dad tried to rape is own daughter — not cool. Otherwise, a good story.
The way I want, no, NEED to read between the lines is that if Zeke hadn't shown up just then, the beautician would have used one of her many pairs of sharp sissors to cut off her dad's offending appendage. Maybe such a "hair cut" could be in the next chapter.