All Comments on 'A Tangled Web Ch. 05'

why cut away from the love making ever time? It makes it feel as if a piece is missing.

Your writing makes the expectation for the next chapter that more intense. Thanks

It is difficult when writing an engrossing story as where to place the porn. Almost always, I find myself writing a story and it afterwards that I have to go back to try and place the sex,

First, where it does not interrupt the story. And second, when it will enhance the storyline by revealing more depth in the characters involved.