All Comments on 'A Tangled Web Ch. 07'

by MissLisaJones

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Not your style

Base of the story is good. But, the way you prolonged it is not satisfactory. The violation is too much and new chapters are not helping very much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
The screw continues to tighten

Okay, characters are great, scenes are very visual. Just one question. Where's the cavalry? Thanks

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