All Comments on 'A Taste of Home Ch. 05'

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Marbles29Marbles29over 14 years ago
A little sad

This has been a great story for me. I'm a little sad its coming to an end but i look forward to your next story:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Excellent

I have to admit that I'm loving the story more and more, each time you post a new chapter. I, also, am saddened that only one chapter will follow but, at the same time, I can't wait to read it. There is only a minor question I have and maybe you already answered it in one of your other stories but what do you mean when talking about a day/nightwalker being bound? Is it like having found your spouse? Although that got me wondering a little, I absolutely enjoy the story. Thanks for sharing it with us :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Love it!

Can not wait for the next chapter. Sad in some respect it will be over but can't wait to see what happens. And who knows, we might see all of them again in a new story line. Maybe one with children!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
love these characters

I hope to see more stories involving these characters. The last chapter of Pen and Ryan's story seemed really abrupt and incomplete. It was really wonderful that you picked back up on the story. The new characters are really developing. Thank you for sharing them and their adventures with us!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
love these characters

I hope to see more stories involving these characters. The last chapter of Pen and Ryan's story seemed really abrupt and incomplete. It was really wonderful that you picked back up on the story. The new characters are really developing. Thank you for sharing them and their adventures with us!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Please MORE!!

Love it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I love this! I was shocked by one sentence though. When Simon says (ha ha!): "Je veux te baiser, mon bel ange", it should read: "Je veux t'embrasser, mon bel ange". Granted, "un baiser" is a kiss, but the verb "baiser" means "to fuck". So, to say "to kiss", we use "embrasser", which literally means "to take someone in one's arms". Je sais, je sais. French is a terribly difficult language, isn't it? By comparison, English is a piece of cake! A part ça, rien à dire sur la qualité du français. ;-))

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