by Hypoxia
I really like your style of writing, it's unique and enduring.
I write incest but don't read it much. I see writing stories like this as puzzle-pieces, where I fit-together improbable elements into plausible plots.This one came out pretty fast, in less than a day. I already knew the points I wanted to hit: hot aunty seducing her nephew, leading to doing mom, and with the cousin thrown in for support. The ping-pong part came from obscure personal history including near-seduction. The people here are real; their actions aren't.
Rather humorous and entertaining. However, I don't believe San Diego has very high humidity, especially during heat waves.
I love those sisters! I look forward to more tales involving them. While I like how DeDe thinks, I would like to see some more of what goes on in Kaitlyn's head. I have a feeling that she can be just as wild as her sister. Maybe it takes her longer to launch. At any rate, you are an awesome story teller and I look forward to more of your work however you lay it out.
Best line of the week, "Todd came with a Vesuvian eruption of endless molten spunk". Nice writing.
It's really good, maybe the sisters should get pregnant and then find out that Katy's husband has daughters to a girl he was screwing on the side when they met and the 2 men had been fucking mother and daughters for years and had knocked them up.