All Comments on 'A Taste of Incest - Spiced Rum'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
A hot , fun story

I really like your style of writing, it's unique and enduring.

HypoxiaHypoxiaalmost 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks so much!

I write incest but don't read it much. I see writing stories like this as puzzle-pieces, where I fit-together improbable elements into plausible plots.This one came out pretty fast, in less than a day. I already knew the points I wanted to hit: hot aunty seducing her nephew, leading to doing mom, and with the cousin thrown in for support. The ping-pong part came from obscure personal history including near-seduction. The people here are real; their actions aren't.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Enjoyable read

Rather humorous and entertaining. However, I don't believe San Diego has very high humidity, especially during heat waves.

tkarddetkarddealmost 8 years ago
Sexy Squared!

I love those sisters! I look forward to more tales involving them. While I like how DeDe thinks, I would like to see some more of what goes on in Kaitlyn's head. I have a feeling that she can be just as wild as her sister. Maybe it takes her longer to launch. At any rate, you are an awesome story teller and I look forward to more of your work however you lay it out.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Very hot story

Best line of the week, "Todd came with a Vesuvian eruption of endless molten spunk". Nice writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
"Faggy"

"Kind of faggy!"

What the hell, dude?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
more

It's really good, maybe the sisters should get pregnant and then find out that Katy's husband has daughters to a girl he was screwing on the side when they met and the 2 men had been fucking mother and daughters for years and had knocked them up.

gNocisgNocisalmost 8 years ago

I really liked this

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
You're uglier than a chuckwalla.

A good line. Keep it light.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nice

Great reading and got me going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Fucked it up bring the other son into the fucking

HypoxiaHypoxiaover 4 years agoAuthor
@anonymous (latest)

That's what cousins are for, init?

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