All Comments on 'A Tasty Treat'

not really mind control. should be in non-human or maybe sci-fi, & apparently headed to bdsm or nc/rel.

story's well written, but a lonely sexy 19 y/o in a lea outfit desperate for a man (if i had a nickel for every one of those, i'd have a whole lotta nothin), who is taken by a vampire (if i had a nickel for every story with that theme... well you know...), who is now going to make her an unwilling slave. If this story continues, I hope it gets more original or I get to like one of the characters (or maybe both?).