All Comments on 'A Thorough Examination'

by Eden_Apple

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lesliejoneslesliejonesover 12 years ago
good turnaround

i thoroughly enjoyed this story and especially the very unexpected twist at the end. very nicely done.

Eden_AppleEden_Appleover 12 years agoAuthor
:-)

Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More!

I hope the ear, nose, and throat specialist to whom Dr. Batista referred Sara is every bit as thorough!

PhoenixCodesPhoenixCodesover 12 years ago
Wonderful

Short, to the point, and sweet - this author leaves you wanting to know more, wanting more of this doctor and her patients. Well written, not a single typo crept in, at least that I noticed. Definitely a favourite author!

My one complaint is the length.. I prefer longer stories. However, with the skill that Eden_Apple writes, I'm sure to be lapping up every thing I'm given.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nails

Acrylic nails and fingering... OUCH! Geez!!

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