All Comments on 'A Threesome is Better than Golf'

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Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

Did not like the ending.

HungDaddiHungDaddiover 2 years agoAuthor

How would you have ended it Diecast1?

SirKevinSirKevinover 2 years ago

Open sexuality + marriage + Honesty is a complex mess most of the time, IRL. Having been in and heard a lot of drama, I think I had a hard time believing that everybody's emotionally okay. In a lot of these stories, one or several people get hurt, and now I'm worried about Tom and everybody's relationship. For me, a text or sending a dirty pic would have been a little bit softer landing. As someone who is living by Ethical Non Monogamy, i was actually kind of worried about Tom. If Kate has a line like: "Tom's always talking about how he wants to see me with a women" or something like that, it foreshadows the surprise ending, and I would feel confident the next story isn't Tom coming to beat up his golfing buddy. All that said, looking forward to the next chapter, but my favorite is FFM, so this will probably stay my favorite. Thanks for getting chapter two out so quickly!

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