by estragon
Certainly not the rosy romance pictured by other authors, but still a very evocative, emotional tale.
Thanks for sharing it!
Personally I'm overjoyed to read about a quasi-realistic hockey player, not some completely fabricated character like in the aforementioned authors' stories. I'm sick of how they make them out to be monogamous, loyal, upstanding gentlemen. Hockey players are egotistical, arrogant and often aggressive. I liked your story very much and would definitely read more.
Okay, it made me laugh. I hope it was supposed to. And although the Islanders are actually owned by a man of Chinese descent (I believe), I don't mind the fiction. Sometimes it's fun to read the other side. Nice job, sir! Way to put the biscuit in the basket.
I thought it was very good. Kind of like Disney on Ice, but with a twist! :-). Seriously, I like a story that draws me in with great dialogue and character development.