All Comments on 'A Timeless Love'

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LittleLynnLittleLynnover 19 years ago
OMIGAWD I love this story!

I just loved this story! I've read some sci-fi like this before, but never erotica. I highly recommend it to anyone interested in either.

The sex was sensual and visual, very stimulating. It left me hot and wanting more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Mind bending

and very very good :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Well done LitRiter

My first Sci-Fi, I love the way you write, I am useless english is not my first language! Thank you for your wonderful story, you had a great plot and your characters come to life and the story brings them together so well. Thank you, look forward to reading more from you

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
She's ALIVE

Shows how well you've written the story when I literally slumped when she was killed

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