All Comments on 'A Timeless Place Ch. 15'

I really enjoyed reading a story that was erotic, rather than pornographic.

One quibble -- the constant desccriptor of Greg as 'the doctor.' I realize that when you are do same sex fiction it can become hard to differentiate between the lovers, but describing him constantly in terms of his profession is distracting and after a while, almost amusing.

Your style is clean and moving. It keeps me interested.

This was an awesome, realistic, and moving write! Can't wait for the book!

I like the flow of this chapter, and the way Bruce reminds Greg of the time in the car. Keep it up Billy.- Bookie1979

luv how u go from remeberance to a tender loving and profound moment with greg (my second favoite) and bruce (my favorite)... i think a story with just them would be just as hot..but then u go and add tony and jonathan that billy my man was a stroke of pure erotic genius.

i luv ur mind dude :)

xxxxx