by blackstroker
So well written from showing, attraction, desire and finally unbridled passion. Reminds me of my mother and myself except we teased for three years before we made love.
I can only give you two stars. I really liked the story, was really enjoying it until Trudy started talking like an Idiot!! That just ruined the whole story. You blew it with that!
Captures the true feelings and relationship between many single moms and sons. Both are often in forced denial until an incident like towels breaks the ice, Strongest love in the world taken to next level is a wonderful thing
I think I missed something between West India and mommy “ She suddenly broke out in Creolese”. This old fart just learned Guyanese Creole is very similar to Louisiana Creole.
Any way. Love the buildup and revelations of mom’s and son’s taboo desires.
(Just remember, nor “ese” in Creole
Women who have long waist lines with medium tits, a larger ass and thick thighs is known as slim and thick. If you had a real black woman you would know that ...
that this was you writing this, I would have skipped it. Your writing leaves a lot to be desired!!!!
This was definitely one of the better stories I've read in a long time. Good build, good timing, reasonable decisions (considering), GOOD WRITING! (Anyone not understanding what "slim-thick" is doesn't have a CLUE!!) Looking forward to more stories from you.
What a beautiful and hot story . Made love to my mom in the 77 when I got out of boot camp . She came to graduation and we decided to drive back so we could just catch up . Stopped and got a motel room for the night and eat . Went for a walk and enjoyed each other company , holding hands and laughing . Gave her a kiss and hug then went back to the room . She is a petite woman with small tits and a hot little body . She went to shower and change when she came out wearing her nightgown I was struck with amazement . From her beautiful feet and red painted toenails to her beautiful face . We just relaxed and talked , she She went to give me a kiss on the cheek and I moved and ended up kissing . We made out and things progressed to me slowly making my way down her body . I sucked and kissed her beautiful feet and toes then up her legs to heaven . She let me make Love to her and it was fantastic . We made love all night and I came in her several times . I found out years later that she had a miscarriage . It definitely was the greatest night of my life and we made love one more time years later .