by KittyAshleyy
Nice little story, I prefer the shorter stories, with characters developed, setting (mostly) prepared and tasks at hand.
There is a need for Proof Reading, and I am providing examples.
With a Gothic tattoo artist stood behind it - standing to match the tense OR where a . . . stood
Two matching stools next on either side : so there are 4 stools, 2 on each side OR there are really two stools, one on each side ?
master had seen to it that in training. . . Now you see it?
My freshly wrapped . . , was on show ? How, if it is wrapped?
Your writing style is strong, the review is a requirement and will take your efforts to much higher ratings.
Congratulations, we'll done!
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Adorable couple, cute story, hot smut, reading this made me very happy! (and horny), good job!