All Comments on 'A Trans Girl's First Tattoo'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice little story, I prefer the shorter stories, with characters developed, setting (mostly) prepared and tasks at hand.

There is a need for Proof Reading, and I am providing examples.

With a Gothic tattoo artist stood behind it - standing to match the tense OR where a . . . stood

Two matching stools next on either side : so there are 4 stools, 2 on each side OR there are really two stools, one on each side ?

master had seen to it that in training. . . Now you see it?

My freshly wrapped . . , was on show ? How, if it is wrapped?

Your writing style is strong, the review is a requirement and will take your efforts to much higher ratings.

Congratulations, we'll done!

Diamondking666Diamondking666about 2 years ago

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Adorable couple, cute story, hot smut, reading this made me very happy! (and horny), good job!

88girfriend88girfriendover 1 year ago

Super hot. Does master let her have any other tattoos?

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