All Comments on 'A Treat's Trick'

5 stars.

Darn, and I'd hoped that he'd stay at the college with his new girlfriend, an instructor in ancient languages.

Great story. I never saw it coming. I would think that “Kelly” wouldn’t be an acceptable assistant and or slave since she not only was too dense to notice the warning signs but then instead of admitting to her flaws, she tried to come up with excuses. If you are going to have someone as your assistant and safety net, you should have someone who pays attention to everything whether large or small. Nothing should be inconsequential when you have someone looking out for your best interests. It was still an excellent read and your descriptions of that blowjob were superb.

Oh hell yeah:

"Oh, just a jump to the left and then a step to the right..."

Very creative.

Great story!

What a fun tale that was, and I enjoyed and applaud your nod to Dr Asimov. Nicely done.

A sequel to this story for Halloween would be really enjoyable. Imagine what Jonas Silversmith and Kelly would be up to on a future Halloween. Would Jonas be enslaving a witch? A succubus? A mortal woman? Or would Jonas and Kelly be living as a couple in another college town, under assumed names and be visited by someone seeking to dominate them?