All Comments on 'A Trip in the Fall Pt. 02'

Thank you. Excellent. This is really well developed. Please continue.

Loving this story. My only concern was that Sarah did assault Jessica and appears to have gotten away with it. Great literotica in that there is a well told story, interesting characters and some erotica. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing with us.

We definitely need more!

great story please add more really soon i will be watching for it.

Great chapter!

5

A great story. Waiting for Jessica to create trouble for Sarah's career.

I'm really liking this so far. I do wish the author/editor would study the proper use of the words to, too, and two. That said, looking forward to more of this excellent story. 5*!

Great story. Love the characters. Looking forward to the next chapter. 5stars

Hope you are going to keep this one going. Its great!!

Great story. 5 stars. Hurry with the next parts.

Wow - Better than first chapter! 4.8*

Reading this story through for a second time. Just brilliant. Thank you