All Comments on 'A Trip in the Fall Pt. 03'

Thank you very much, I am enjoying your story.

Another great chapter!

5

I really like the characters but all of the drama is resolved too quickly, there's very little miscommunication that isn't fixed within a page or two. There's just such low amounts of drama considering she's a rising country star and he's a high school teacher from NJ. I don't want them to break up but I want to wonder "will they make it". Characters are 5* and that's what I rated it but it needs more tension.

5 Stars, Please expedite the finished product. Thank you!!

More please

I love this story keep the chapters coming!!!!!

Great story.......but when is your next chapter? Will that be the final?

Keep up the good work!

Loving this! Desperate for next chapter! When are we going to get it?

Great story please add more.

Best? Scot or Mitch? Let the vote begin! LOL! 4.6*

Another great chapter. Loving it!

We’re lovin the story totally.

The only small detail that shook us a bit was when Sarah told random she was moving to Nashville! It seemed that with all the talking and video they do constantly, and how lovin close they have become; that she would have discussed it with him from the start. She didn’t, but made plans for her dad to come up and start looking for houses with her. Random was completely left out of the loop until she surprised him. I bit more inclusive would be appreciated.