All Comments on 'A Trip in the Fall Pt. 04'

Christmas came early with this present. Thank you for continuing this very enjoyable story. 5*

This is a well-written and developed story. Will be looking forward to more chapters!

Please finish this series

Thanks for your creativity and am certainly looking forward to the next installment!

You've done a great job of making the characters real in our imagination, not an easy feat!

Please tell us that you are going to finish this story.

This is a great story. It's been a while since there has been an update. Hopefully you still plan to finish this story

Great Story, Hopefully you'll finish it.

You deserve more comments and pleas. Seeing your gap between postings and your lament at the difficulty, leads me to appreciate the effors of you and so many others here who give freely to us freeloaders so much of their time and talent.

Great series I hope you keep it going

I just found your work and I hope you come back to this

This series has been great and you asked your readers to be patient. It’s been 9 months, just wondering if you are going to finish it or leave all of us hanging.

I was just about to start reading this series and decided to check if it was completed and I’m glad I did. With this long of a break they usually do not get finished or are just rushed ending. With that being said is it a waste of time to read even if it may not ever be finished?

Thats not a series, that's unfinished business ! :-[

The next installment should be up in the next week or so. I’m about halfway through writing it, had some major issues with dialogue and the details, but things are flowing again.

Another great chapter!

5

I really want to give this one another 5*, but I just can't. I get this is literotica, but multiple detailed sex scenes after they've been in a committed relationship just doesn't mover the plot lines along. they're well done, but it numbs my brain after a while and I know scroll through them. Still love the series, but skimming is not good. One of the prologues mentioned ending the series in "April"? I know this series is already way more than you initially wanted to do, but give your loyal readers the complete story arc we deserve. Meaning - we want drama, marriage, kids, old age, all of it! LOL! 4.4*

Love the story. I have to agree with Demosthenes that the extended sex scenes are a bit unnecessary at this stage; I also skip through them. The real drama is in their lives and relationships.