All Comments on 'A True Slut'

For those not fan of that, it is interracial ( a bit overdone but oh well ), and not really incest, seeing as it is a step-daughter with her step-father.

If your cock is as big as your ego, it must be gigantic........

First prize for the worst story of the week so far. Unpleasant to read and ridiculous dialogue.

Shocking grammar almost al the way through. Surely a step daughter is just unpleasant and not incestuous.

First of all...adopted daughter and dad ? Oh well...

No problem with the interracial part though. It was the bit what i quite enjoyed though.

But the entire "story" telling or the lack of, is ridiculous.

It was just right to the action, this then stretched out and then call it a story.

No "foreplay" or explaining characters properly. the building up is missing.

What i mean by that is.

He adopted her, she was 4 when he found her. You basically told us nothing really about their relationship apart from that.

Also what I had a problem with was the constant wording he used and "his" behavior. For one he basically raped her, apart from her desire. Constantly calling her bitch, whore etc. before really anything happened?

What I mean is, he raised her so that would usually mean he loved her from a fathers side perspective, you showed nothing of that.

(Storytelling like: he walked into her room with camera cake/present, when he accidentally found her half dressed in sexy lingerie and surpressed feelings came back up. Then a little dialogue, then for example going to the party she getting wasted relying on him, they getting closer he gets his feelings again. This how you can stretch a story without empty text)

To be fair i just read it until he tied her to the bed. Couldnt handle more,

Just had to put in "adoptive daughter" to completely chicken out on this supposed IT story. Saved me a lot of time.

Utter drivel