All Comments on 'A True Slut's Education Ch. 01'

Story is great! Very sexy. One piece of constructive criticism is that it is "intents and purposes" not "intensive purposes". It was a bit jarring although the story itself is very good.

erm...nope! all my own work n that really is me...

Absolute tosh ... and even the picture in her profile is a fake. The story was ripped off another submissions site.

I love how this story feels real emotionally despite the over the top fantasy elements

Very well written. Too often stories on this site have no build up. This story was well developed. Like the others, I look forward to the next chapters. Well done.

made me eager to see what happens next--and your profile taught me a word--tittivate--which I plan to try to use as often as I can, since it has a nice ring.

Thank you for sharing this fascinating story, and I look forward to wherever it's going.

great story, well written, very descriptive and HOTT! I too am a feedback whore and crave comments from readers of my stories, and you thoroughly earned this one my friend! I am already waiting for the next segment in this saga. keep up the good work!

thanks vmp! I admit I am a comment whore, I love feedback on my writing - especially positive of course but creative criticism is accepted too x

The description of Louise'e feelings was very well done.